2nd Revision

For our second revision we added a shot and re-did the shot of Mia (Hope) walking into her room after she came home from school. We added an insert shot of Mia leaning on her door to add the dramatic effect of what Mia was going through and how stressed she felt. Right after Mia opens her door to walk into her room this shot is added and cuts back to when she sets her things on the bed.